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Originally Posted by Lubesh
As night draws nigh, drawn thighs slide and gape as shocks of light filter and deploy their silk fingertips in a heavenly sigh. Air hotly brushes her neck and the stray strands of cobalt black that shyly glint in the wisps of hair, is swept up by a phantom stare of man first and spectre only in her dreams.
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I am just going to say, WOW! what a beautiful way to open up a story. It got my attention right away.
As I read the peice, a sense of love, romance, comfort just flowed through. But yet saddeness was lurking in the corners till the end when it fully came out, to be quited by the love of a mother for her son.