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Old 23-04-2009, 05:40 PM
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Re: Air

WOW!!
This really got to me.... mainly from past experiences, but really wow... such splendid and well used emotion!

this is such a beautiful poem though it be heart breaking.

and the exaggerated spacing really put forward the emotions etc.
loved it
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