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08-11-2009, 09:14 AM
Kalinda
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Re: Clone (Chapter 5)
Interesting development of ideas. Again good characterization for Freya and a good story.
But as the others have mentioned, it is mainly dialogue driven and there is scarcity of descriptive details.
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