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Re: John Meets God
Funny Superbum. You had a couple sentences without a punctuation at the end and a couple run on sentences that I shortened up (where it naturally stopped anyway). Besides that, only one spelling error noted and corrected. Funny story. Considering this audience, I think it'll be well received. LOL
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