[Odanion]

I agree with a lot of people here...you warn that it is gory...but to have real gore...you need a lot more discription in it about the gore parts...plus to make a scene gory...dont just say *I stabbed her and watched her bleed* you could try *I drove the blade through her stomach, enjoying the drowned out gasp of pain, finaly twisting the blade I pulled it out watching how the blood seemed to drip from it like an eerie red poison.* description is the key to all