[DavidJW]

I didn't realise until the end that this story was technically Fan-Fiction, I love the original Conan the Barbarian movie, and it's rare to see someone write their own Conan stories. Very refreshing. Well written with a good knowledge of the world and ways that Conan comes from. Great usage of words within the dialogue, excellent grammar throughout. An opening that was well thought out and actually works really well, setting the reader up for what is to follow. I think your Nephew, along with many other people will love and enjoy this story - keep writing. Excellent work.