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Shadow Lover
The spacing was deliberate, yes? The word is don't. The word is every time. "Go ahead; look in that box over there." There is no such word is tooked, the word is took. The word is proffered. "..and Machus picked up the bag, took her hand, and began walking towards the door." The word is fifteen-minute. The word is couldn't. "..and then walked back over to his first victim." "He was transformed into the darkness that had destroyed him,.." The word is won't. The word is sweetie. The word is couldn't. "..maybe one of the big tall adults had hurt their knees." The word is carriage. The word is curiosity. "She said sniffling as another tear fell." The word is luminous. "He asked a sudden urgency in his voice." "Her father's slippers were tucked under.." "No little one, not yet." "..have his little Angel back again." "Death hugged her tightly; glad to finally.." The word is fireplace. "With that, he slipped out the door and closet it behind himself,.." The word is didn't. The word is windowpanes. "..she still did not understand exactly where.." The word is piece. The word is jewelry. The word is pieces. "Yes, they were beautiful,.." The word is kingdom. The word is top hat. "..anger, as Marle had never seen about him evident on his handsome face." "Finally, Death seemed to notice her.." The word is monsieur. The word is moonlight. "..where she can be heard today whispering warnings about the Shadow lover. The story contains many fragmented ideas. The story contains repetitive words that could be substituted with another word. The story seems brief but has great potential.
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