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Re: The Glass Sword - Chapter two
This is honestly, one of the most enthralling stories I've ever read. I love it, every aspect of it kept me hooked and wanting for more. I can't give you anything to improve on because it's already so amazing. The description is amazing, the dialouge as well, the sword fight scene was well-said and easy to follow. I <3 The Glass Sword. Keep it up 
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I write 2 stories in the morning, I write 2 stories at night, I write 2 stories in the afternoon and it makes me feel alright. I write 2 stories in time of peace and 2 in time of war. I write 2 stories after I write 2 stories and then I write 2 more.
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