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Re: A Painful Life
This could be good.
I don't care about the character, it needs time to develop the relationship, and describe the pain, it's far too short to do itself justice.
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It's amazing how sweet shit can smell
For a while I wore some as cologne
And many a woman I did woo
Until one day a man said to me
He said, "You smell of shit"
And it was true.
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