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Old 21-02-2007, 09:17 PM
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My Lilli

Synopsis: This poem describes the strange properties of a boyfriend's relationship with his girlfriend. It is written in a new form of poetry I've named Exclamatory.


I'm less and less in love with love and more in love with her.
I'm in love with who she is and not with who we were.
First of all I love my God and he gave her to me.
I've been given care of her. My joy's when she's happy.
He has promised her content and her joyfulness.
But only if I practice prayerful carefulness.
I love my Lilli always, though we still fight
About stupid things when we each think we're right.
I don't miss her as soon as she's away.
I used to. Now, I think of her all day.
She is the one that keeps me going,
Gives me hope, and keeps my blood flowing.
I know secrets she tries to hide
And all the things she keeps inside.
I'm the one who wipes her tears
and keeps them as souvenirs
Of all the hard times;
The I, me, my, mines.
And later I'll look
In her huge tear book
And say, "That's her.
Mine forever."
While in bliss,
I'll see this
Detail
Brief tale
Of
Love
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I judge a man by what he tells me of himself, for if he's lying, he's a liar and anything I perceive him as is better than that.
(past choices+past circumstance=who I am) +choice=who I'll be

Last edited by JirQUEST; 27-02-2007 at 09:11 PM.
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