[Pule]

Not bad. I didn't like the use of "vast" twice in the first few lines, maybe you can come up with another word, but it was generally good. This line also bugged me a bit:

[q]Became scorched and withered and was no more seen[/q]

I'd change it to
"Became scorched and withered, no longer seen"

or something, but it gets a little bit too long and breaks the sort of rhythm