Thread: The Dark Cloud
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Old 28-02-2007, 07:06 AM
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Question Re: The Dark Cloud
The sentence warrants a question mark, yes? "..I wouldn't want to die here, but does she have to come with me?" Did you intentionally mean to spell magic with a "k?" You have seen "Dungeon and Dragons?" The mention of "the Green Maje Ideals of pacifism," what is this? And what is the larger story? The writing seems too short there must be more information to tell whatever story that you have in your mind.
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