Re: Sick
I disagree with Nluv the last 2 lines are fitting to the poem. The reader is given the beginning of the illness to the last outcome of the illness. I apologize "illness," is the proper word but I think you understand what I mean.
You did not imply that the child had either a cold or flu?? The symptoms: stuffy nose, fever, chills, red eyes? What is the diagnosis here?
The poem is very lively and a delight to read regardless of the infirmity.
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