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Re: The Seeker
Nice! Not a problem that I do see, you're skills of the magic of the words is very very good, quite creative as well! A very classical view of a wanderer, and yet you've still brought life to an ancient classic, well done! Your rhyming was of the utmost care, every line brought a fresh picture of this little picture book clear to my mind, and that miss, is how a good poem should be!
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You guys all know I'm a lazy reviewer, so please PLEASE PM me if you want a specific poem or story commented on! There's no pleasure in eeny-meany-mieny-moe-ing everything nowadays! Yare yare...
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