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Old 21-03-2007, 04:16 AM
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Question Re: Highway to Hell
I try and look past spelling and punctuation errors but I must say this piece is a bit abrupt. You must watch your spacing errors. I was hooked within the first two paragraphs.

Are you going to add more to this giving further details that were rushed through the first time? Why would there be a hooker in the woods? Was this story inspired from a movie? Was this inspired from some old urban legend?
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