[Iscariot]

Technical errors weigh this story down savagely. In all honesty I had a hard time focusing on the material because it had so many mistakes.

The concept isn't really anything new, but you could still do a lot with it if you fill the world out a little more.

Last thing, if she is such a great assassin why does she leave the knife at the murder scene. That seems very amateurish and terribly sloppy for a trained killer.