Interesting story you have here.
I found a few mistakes you should correct. In the next sentence I believe you should also change "man" into "guy", since his name is Mann.
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A man called Simon Mann. He was on his was
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Hovers Gorge wasn't in one of those roads one could suddenly
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Very classic. However, I can't understand how he could have driven into the gorge. Wasn't he watching the road? You can have a GPS, but that doesn't mean you don't have to watch the road, right? If you can clarify that for me, I would be very grateful.