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Re: The Haunting
Two words, NICE FINISH. Excellent job! I was reading this and didn't know what to expect because all I knew was the title, but the title gave me a few good ideas. They were all the WRONG ones of course, but anyway...
I like the idea of the haunter being the haunted and how only the dog and cat could see him. You nicley explained why a ghost would moan of wander infinnetedly in one place, and I REALLY like the ending. Great job, EXCELLENT job, I can't say anymore than that! I (after school, it's like 6:30AM over where I am) going to look for more of your stuff. Keep it up! ^_^
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