Quite an argument you have here Nephilim.
This would be Victory Gin
I loved this part
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"Fine, jump, I've got you!" He untied the knot on the hose and dropped hard into the dirt at my feet.
"Missed," I said unapologetically, "now let's go."
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It has a humor 1984 didn't have.
My absolute favorite scene in the whole book is the one in the interrogation room (101). The part where Winston tries to place Julia between himself and the rats is so well written that there is no comparing it to anything else. I'm sorry you didn't choose to present some form of interrogation.
I do have one suggestion to make to that end. This would also satisfy Winston(the user): what if Tyler were to betray you character right in the end and chop his hand off or something similar? This way the system prevails and Big Brother lives on undisturbed.