[Nephilim]

good call on the hard liquor. it has been changed to Victory Gin. i had it as Wild Turkey before as a sort of ode to the Punisher, but this makes more sense and holds more detail from the book. also, i revised the interrogation scene at the end to match a little more with what 1984 may have done. its not perfect, but its a change for the better.

really, i dont like winston (the character or the user). The character because he speaks of lofty ideas, but backs down at the first sign of torture. the user, because he made no constructive criticism, just insult. he failed to realize the point of this section, to add ones own touches to a story. plus he was just a dick. "Consider retiring?" seriously, you need to kill yourself.

anyway in a roundabout point, i really didnt want the traditional ending, because that is what i disliked most about the book. they become as submissive as everyone else. i didnt want Big Brother to win this one. granted i didnt want him dismantled, but this would at least allow I and Tyler to escape. i enjoy discussing my stories, and honestly you are the best, most loyal review ive met yet. i look forward to discussing these topics further and reading your stories when they come along.

all the best,
Neph