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Old 30-03-2007, 03:28 PM
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Re: Stories

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Originally Posted by Peppy View Post
(I'm tired, main reason why this may not make sense.)

I was in the mood for something with large paragraphs and a bit wordy, and I found it. I like how imaginative you are and how you bring your readers with you in to your mind--the you's(?) and the we's helps you suck me in. This seems different than your previous works, maybe it's your voice or the words you use in the piece.
Yep, wordy I can be. And this is definitely more in my own voice.

I'm probably too imaginative for my own good...
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