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Re: A Snowboard Christmas - Chapter 1
Very cool. Your characters are very life-like, I like that, I already like Kyle and as for Kara, don't get me started. So far it seems to be very smooth and quite excellent, I think you have something going for you here. Well I'm done, good work.
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