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Old 10-04-2007, 03:50 PM
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Re: The Seeker

interesting read. im really not much of a fantasy fan, but i will admit i was intrigued. the rhyme scheme is awesome, and the underlying magical quality is complimented by it. good job. i have a hard time criticizing poetry, even grammatically, but even if i didnt, i dont think i would be able to find a thing wrong with this.
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