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Old 28-08-2004, 06:04 AM
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Re: Obsession
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Originally Posted by Gordon
Someone should rate mine - I'll give it a 5/5 for adjectives
u have tons of adverbs, rather than adjectives. but we all have to start from somewhere. so hey, just keep writing and getting more comments for it. you'll improve
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