[Vail]

Nicely done, and well phrased throughout. I love extravagance and the flaunting of intelligence. It's so nice to see that expressed in others' work.. very liberating. I'm not sure this is quite depression or despair, and see it definitely falling into the dark category, but these days the lines between the two blur so readily, I don't blame you for posting it here.

And as for the innocence part, I swear it is only there to be destroyed by the truth and eventuality in this frustrating world we slog through. I think you captured that sentiment very well, good write, hope it gets more reviews... don't be surprised if it doesn't though, people are scared of big words and having to think. Thanks for sharing.