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Re: Bulge.
ive never been good with writting emotion.
chances are, i wont touch this for a while kuz it was the only story i posted that i had time to think about. im a much better spontanious writter; i think that "statistics" (d-day + 3 story) was one of my better pieces of crap cuz i wrote it outta sheer bordness.
read statistics for better quality writting; expect similar stuff, kuz war is boring. keep in mind tho, this is third person; im observing not doing the action.
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