Nice poem Bri. Very well done, you manage to optimise the poetry with so little words, that's why I think your so adept at the 55's This was very well done, almost socio-political. Strong, truthful poetry. Fantastic.
Quote:
Cellophane surface
No one act’s that well
No amount of change
Will mend what’s inside
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Does acts need an apostrophe?
Loved it.
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I like boys with strong convictions
and convicts with perfect diction,
Underdogs with good intentions
Amputees with stamp collections
-So Nice, So Smart