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Re: Broken Candles
Wow. I don't think I've read much of your work, but if they compare this poem, I am really missing out. Your use of metephor creates a vivid image that truly brings your words to life and creates a wonderful mood. Nice work man.
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I won't rent you my time, I won't sell you my brain, I won't pray to a male god, that would be insane. And I can't support the troops, cuz every last one of them is being duped, and I will not rest a wink until the women have regrouped.
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