wow I'm shocked!
Thanks allot for all the great comments everybody!
Jess: don't feel too bad- I don't even understand all of it lol
Tim: Quite a set on compliments man- I thank you. haha yeah must have been weird reading and skyping at the same time.
Venus: Thank you kindly!
I'm glad you like it! (btw I have been reading your story faithfully! Just haven't had too much time to comment recently. Really getting interesting!)
Bri: Thanks for pressing for the stream of consciousness folder!! I think you are right; I almost saw this as a journal entry so it allowed me to open up a bit more I think; instead of over-preparing my words.
Corneac: shoddy and miscalculated!?! You're crazy man! I'm not joking at all when I say I've learned a great deal from your style of writing. Your words have influenced me as a writer in many subtle ways; and I think this poem is a good example of that. Thanks for the compliments man!