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Re: Your Words
Wow, I like that a lot! The last stanza really expresses things and wraps it up/ties it together nicely. The last two stanzas have so much emotion. It's like a turning point right there, where a decision is made about how to react once the shock wears off. I also like the way that "words" means so many different things, in all those different contexts.
Small words together painting a big picture. Nice!
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