['Ginnis]

You have strong ideas, the concept of a woman who's lost her daughter coincidentally purchasing a home that has the grave of a small child in the garden is lovely, however you lack of developing them really destroys the potential of your pieces. Who was Anne Marie, what can we learn about your protagonist, how did she lose her own child? You have so many wonderful options to develop this with and yet you don't, neglecting potential. Your formatting needs some severe revision as well, bad grammar can ruin a great story. And just for starters, we do no use "OMG" in formal writing.