Not too much to get excited about here. There's No real story arc and nothing that really makes me care about the characters. The whole time I was reading I was wondering how you were going to kill them off. That kept me going to the end.
A few random thoughts:
* Why would you talk to a travel agent to visit your parents?
* Proposing at a funeral?? What a sap.
* Weird ending. Run the dental records and CSI could find the fetus...
