[Ferris]

I love it!

Though I got the impression of a forced love at times, the tender surrender at others. I may have got it confused a little bit, but I certainly got the gist of it.

Although, the flower could be a little bit cliche' since where I come from, to have some one picking your flower can mean more than a few things!!

Still, very well written. I think this is why I cant write poetry too well, i cant do what you have done!