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Re: A Restraining Order for Jesus
Very good poem. Flawless in fact, from where i'm sitting. If I had to find a gripe I would say the witness statement date is pehaps a bt cliche, but I guess it fits anyway. And thats not much of a flaw. Look forward to reading more of your work.
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come to send, not condescend
transcendental consequence
is to transcend where we are
who are we? who we are
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