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Originally Posted by Deadman
Very good poem. Flawless in fact, from where i'm sitting. If I had to find a gripe I would say the witness statement date is pehaps a bt cliche, but I guess it fits anyway. And thats not much of a flaw. Look forward to reading more of your work.
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Hi Deadman and thanks for these kind words. And let me straight away say it's good to learn you're alive and dead. I have to say, on the specific point you make, I feel obliged to agree with you now my attention has been drawn to the particular date itself. I will almost certainly get around to amending it some time soon.....
Thanks Colin