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Re: And the Violin Played
Haruna-
I am so glad you stuck this one out and wrote it until it's finish. It is marvelous, with the opening and ending lines painting the scene like a story. I love the turn of "the blood in lace" to "his blood in lace" and the rhyme is not overdone here either. I hope to see more out of you after this one!! Wonderful work.
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