[wave1345]

You have a way of creating an atmosphere with your words, and a certain elegant flow. Loved it!

You wrote: The sky is a bright, dazzling, blinding blue.
Suggestion: As a rule, I would try to keep descriptions to 2 adjectives, max.

You wrote: In the distance a few puffy cumulus clouds are the only break in the uniformity. Even they fail to provide much perspective.
Suggestion: The second sentence feels a little clunky to me. Combine them, maybe? In the distance a few puffy cumulus clouds are the only break in the uniformity, but even they fail to provide much perspective.

You wrote: I recognize the walkway, know it well in fact.
Suggestion: Semicolon or period instead of a comma?

The rest seems pretty tight! I don't know if it's me or not, but I see some errors in formatting from when it was copied and pasted, perhaps? All of the apostrophes are gibberish characters to me.