[LullabyHearts]

I completely agree with both of you as a whole its not completely finished but I really needed to put it out and get some opinions. This is my first poem I've actually put more time and dedication into. I kind of changed it several times, the point of the whole poem.

And yes, I've always wanted to write a full out story just like this and the poem reinspired me as well.

Thank you, thank you both. Your input helps most definitely.