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Re: Second Chances
I thought I recognized this one. ^_^ Hey Haruna! Although it's not one of my favorites of yours poetry-wise, I still love the depth of emotion you put into your writing, particuarly this piece. I cringe to recommend it but...some sort of meter would help. Please?
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The fog comes
on little cat feet.
It sits looking
over harbor and city
on silent haunches
and then moves on.
-Carl Sandburg
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