[Lubesh]

"You lied to me! You didn't tell me you are my son! That I have a son!" yelled angrily at the boy.

The bit in bold needs rewording..maybe also the end bold ...you have missed the person's name ....yelled angrily

You didn't tell me that you were my son!

Also as I read you still have a few errors in your punctuation eg "I say", the commas/periods should always be inside ur quotes...."I say,"

Othe than that i found this crytpic a bit but definitely surreal and dark and it is a familair theme but if felt your direct apparoach leant to it. Well done!