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Re: The Memory Machine
Simple, but very appealing. I especially like how you start the piece with 'Once upon a time', which gives the whole thing a sort of fable-ish, dreamy feeling and makes sense with the simple structure. Great bittersweet ending, great concept (do watch Eternal Sunshine, by the way. Love it.), great piece.
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The fog comes
on little cat feet.
It sits looking
over harbor and city
on silent haunches
and then moves on.
-Carl Sandburg
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