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Re: Eternal Silence
Aww Bri...and you call em talented. Geez. Whenever you say that I wanna hit you over the head with a oversized novelty baseball mitt. This...is bloody amazing and you know it. Just everything the into into each stanza, the way you brought them all tother and sheer emotional totality of it all. One of my favourite pieces form you to date. just brimming with earnest emotion...man...lol
Technically, it was also bloody refreshing. A real easy poem to read...but one that makes you think you know? You used the differing aspects of sound to their full effect and carried the metaphor all the way through so well. And you say I do that well...you can’t bloody talk. Eve the italicized, bolded font was well used.
I loved it...and you made me real sd. Thanks a lot. lol. nah....awesome...what a poem!
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"Snip! Snap! Snip! the scissors go;
And Conrad cries out - Oh! Oh! Oh!
Snip! Snap! Snip! They go so fast;
That both his thumbs are off at last.
Mamma comes home; there Conrad stands,
And looks quite sad, and shows his hands;-
"Ah!" said Mamma "I knew he'd come
To naughty little Suck-a-Thumb." - The Story of Suck-a-Thumb, Heinrich Hoffman
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