Thread: The Memory Machine
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Old 21-09-2007, 10:46 AM
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Re: The Memory Machine
EP this is fantastic work. Very nice job! It's not easy to tell a story in couplets- you've done it with ease. Seems quite inspired.

The first stanza was a great introduction as well.
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