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Re: I Saw Her In The Garden
I have to agree with the panel here. I liked the begining, and even the end where it reveals the lost of the parents daughter. But I think it was a bit ambiguous for me. I couldn't tell fully if this was supposed to be serious, or humourous. Yet with all that said I think that you have a good voice and potential to shine in future pieces. Thank you for putting yourself out there.
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