Thread: Oh! The Woe of the Cell Phone
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Old 30-09-2007, 12:56 PM
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Re: Oh! The Woe of the Cell Phone
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No new calls from you to me.
Nice repitition

Although overall, the poem just didn't have too much going on for it. I think you should've added more of a deeper meaning. Like the phone call was the first call or something
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