Re: Mirror II
Should it not be…Mirror, mirror on the wall
What about so that you are less repeating…
Mirror, mirror on the wall
showing me truths you hide from all
A monster in you I see
the monster looks just like me
Alone, frustrated, angry or hurt
whiny, boring, rude and curt
Fists of hate and eyes of sorrow
truths don’t heal so lies I borrow
Broken hearted, tired soul
begs for freedom from lack of control
The face I see in you, is mine.
But hark! It could very well be thine.
This is a repeating idea that restates the same idea in the line above it, originally written.
A great expression of words/ideas regardless of my inquires.
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Right, I'll keep to the present but just take a glance at the past. Damn, is this poetry?
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