[Merrywinds]

Great, especially the ending(although I guess it has been said). Hard to find anything to improve, although....

I think you could have gotten more "voice" into this story; it is somehow... Well, flat isn't the right word, but something like it. It's also quite short. On the other hand, that's good; some stories are better short; but on the other hand, it's easier to get more voice and characterisation into a long story.

Just a few ideas, but a wonderful story anywayas! Keep it up!