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i kept waiting for it to switch to a hospital where he was in intensive care, but, alas, he didnt.
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You know the one thing I personally enjoyed about this piece? The ending is open. You can either choose to kill Ethaniel or have him shifted to intensive care
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Still it was a good piece, though, you didnt give much reason for the high intellect. He could still be a loner and not care much for life as I slightly idiotic person. He didnt neccessarily need to be a genious, though, it was a nice touch.
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You know... I wanted to portray Ethaniel as someone I would have liked to be. Initially, that's how he started out. However, I had to change the character a lot as the story developed in my head. Also I had to keep that intellect and uniqueness in his character in order to have Sarah be attracted to him.