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Old 06-10-2007, 11:44 AM
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Re: Life

The haiku was achieved well, but what I like best was the overall message and how it was conveyed. You just don't read about it much, and I appreciate the candor. Great piece.
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The fog comes
on little cat feet.
It sits looking
over harbor and city
on silent haunches
and then moves on.
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