Thread: Good vs. Evil
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Old 08-10-2007, 02:53 AM
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Re: Good vs. Evil

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As I read back and catch up on all Ive missed while I've been away I find that I love all of the thought and retrospect this poem created......I wish all of my poems had that effect
Indeed. Such a great feeling to have it bring up thoughts and emotions which can be discussed/argued.

Great poem, though I feel there is a comma missing from the first line, but I fear that placing on there would mess up the flow.

Love it!
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